Monday, April 23, 2012

The End.



Author's Note: I know, I haven't posted in a while, but I am back.:) This essay is a poem analysis for the poem "Where the Sidewalk Ends". Below I have posted a copy of the poem for you all to read! Keep in mind that this is just my interpretation, so nothing is set-in-stone to be the real reason it was written. I hope you all enjoy my 2012 DWA piece. 
Where the Sidewalk Ends
There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.

Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
And the dark street winds and bends.
Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
We shall walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And watch where the chalk-white arrows go
To the place where the sidewalk ends.

Yes we'll walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
The place where the sidewalk ends.

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Where the Sidewalk Ends by Shel Silverstein may be an old poem written many years ago, whose author happens to be dead, but it is personally my favorite poem ever written.  When I was littler, I thought the poem was about a real sidewalk.  But recently, I have figured that it’s not. It is about so much more; that sidewalk that he talks about, that’s life, but more importantly the end of your life.

If I told you that last night I went outside and the trees were dancing, what would you think? Would you really believe that the trees were tangoing or possibly waltzing? Of course not, trees can’t dance, but we can picture them dancing. These are figurative language devices that help us get an image. So when Shel Silverstein sat down to write this poem, he wasn’t writing about a walk down a sidewalk. 
There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.”
 
The sidewalk is your time, your journey, your life.  And at some point it’s going to come to a stop. When he talks about the sidewalk ending, right before the street begins – we get the first look into using devices. The street is your after life, either Heaven or Hell or wherever you go after you die and the sidewalk is the moment you die.  When Silverstein mentions the bird resting from its flight, I get a feeling that the bird is a person, one who’s “resting” from their long stressful life on earth. Throughout the whole poem we see how he works figurative language into the piece.

When reading a poem, you don’t only want to look for the meaning used behind the words; you want to read it in the voice that the author is trying to show-- often known as the tone of the piece. If I were to listen to a recording of somebody reading this poem, I would safely bet that they would not be yelling. They probably wouldn’t be laughing, joking around, or reading through with no expression, but instead using a calm voice, a very Morgan Freeman narrating the March of the Penguins style. No matter what poem you’re reading, the only way you will completely comprehend the poem is if you understand the tone that the author is trying to use.

Aside from looking at the figurative language and the tone when analyzing a poem, it is important to find the mood of the piece. In kindergarten you learned that your mood was what you were feeling. You could be happy or sad, sometimes even mad, right? Well when you’re finding the mood of a poem, it’s the exact same thing. The feeling that you get when reading a poem is the mood. When I read “Where the Sidewalk Ends” I feel like there are no worries in the world. It makes dying seem like such a normal thing, not scary at all. As for me, the mood in this piece --even though the topic is such a horrifying thing – is happy.

At a glance, this poem might be about a real sidewalk, maybe even one in the Village of Pewaukee, like what I thought when I was littler. However now I realize that it holds so much more underneath the words.  I realize that the author wants us to feel certain ways when reading his work; I realize that he purposely uses figurative language devices to paint a picture; I realize that this poem isn’t really about a place where the sidewalk ends.


Forgive Me

People. They hurt you, break you, and can even kill you.  They surround you with comfort, and then  rip it away from you.  They can pretend that they care, and a day, month, or even year later tell you the  truth.  They can make you feel great one day, and be on the bottom of the earth the next.  They wrap  their hands around your heart and play with it. Like it's a toy. They think that no matter what they do,  you'll forgive them.  But there has to come a point where you let go of them, right? Wrong. They'll  control  you for so long, that you don't know what you'll do when they're gone. You don’t remember the  person you were before they changed you…for the worse. But that's just the way life goes, because the things that seem so comforting, so gentle, so perfect, aren't. Those things are people.  Those things are you.

Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Mother to Son Response

When reading the poem "Mother to Son",  illiterate people may get confused. There is a ton of figurative language, like metaphors and similes, but also just strange grammar idiosyncrasies. In the poem, Langston Hughes refers to life.  "Life for me ain't been no crystal stair". Well, obviously life is not a step made out of a shiny rock, but that's not what he means. Hughes wants us to get the point that he is not talking about a staircase. The crystal stair is rich, white-people life. Sorry to say, but in the past white people had better lives. They had free lives, they had worthy lives, they had crystal lives.

When you sit down with your mom to talk about life, chances are she isn't going to scream. She isn't going to yell, but she's going to be firm. She isn't going to start crying either, she'll just be using a firm tone. That's the tone of this piece (ironic, isn't it? How I say tone -- and that magically is the tone). She's talking to her son about life, giving off an inspirational feeling. The mood of this piece makes you feel very inspired, and happy about life. It helps you keep going, and making you feel inspired and to never give up your life.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Strength.

If I asked you to tell me what your favorite word is; what would you say? No I don't mean something like "agenda" or " sassafras" -- more along the lines of an inspiration. Something that has meaning. Think of that word, in your head. The one that keeps you going through the day. I am going to make a pretty safe bet saying that the majority of you would say words like "love" or "believe" or "hope", right? But, why? Why are we thinking of these words, fantasy words, when this is real life? I think that the words we should be thinking of are "trust" "loyalty" and "strength". Yeah, there is love in the future, but there is strength now. I think that rather than focusing on the fairytale words, we should close in on the ones that might actually help us. The ones with meaning, the ones that we should be thinking about.

Monday, April 2, 2012

A Place Called Resource

Author's Note: Hello my fellow students. I was recently looking through my Writer's Notebook in OneNote and came across this piece. I wrote this a long time ago, referring to something that was going on in my life at that time. I didn't want to give away the problem, since it is kind of personal -- but wanted a way to express the feeling of my life. I don't think many of you -- if any -- will find the true meaning of this story.  Katie and Haylie, don't you think it will be interesting to see what others come up with? Leave me a comment telling me what you think this story is about. :) 


People lie.  They meet halfway, to try to make their story connect.  They leave problems behind, and face new ones at their new location.  They sign out of their old life, and walk down the way to a new one.  Pain to others in each step they take. Like the feeling of a sword through your heart…pain.  But, they aren't.  They're happy -- because they chose this path.  This one thing that they want so badly.  Soon, they realize that all it does is suck, and they turn around, and return to their old place. A place called resource.